For the past few weeks, I’ve been taking a writing course on ‘Keeping Tension Alive’ in stories by the wonderful Susan Meier. There’s nothing like brushing up on writing skills, but this particular course attracted me because I wanted to learn how to inject more tension into my stories, between my characters and to keep the reader hooked.
And this doesn’t apply just to romance stories, if you’re curious.
One thing that stood out to me in the course was understanding that each main character should have an internal incorrect core belief, which leads to conflict. It is something characters will then learn to grow from throughout the story – part of a character’s arc. So if you’re wandering what this means, let’s go deeper.
Core belief – the way I understand it: A conclusion someone comes to based on the events that have happened in their lives – it’s shaped them into who they are, and as a result they hold dearly onto this belief. As far as they are concerned, this core belief is correct. People build these core beliefs to avoid pain and protect themselves. They often rely on it without realizing they’ve done so. It’s their go to mode when things get tough.
For example, in my book Cursecaster, the main character had a terrible upbringing, thrown from one foster home to another, and as a result her core belief is that trust leads to mistreatment and pain. (this is where history for each character comes into it, but that’s another lesson in class)
Now I throw my character, who is unable to trust anyone, into a situation where the only way she’ll survive is to rely on another person, and bang you have conflict. Or at least the start of it.
Incorrect Core Belief stems from a character’s past and is often based on an incorrect assumption.
This belief drives the decisions the character makes, it pushes them to do things a certain way as well as giving them a lot of internal grief. But over the course of the story, the character starts to see their faults, the trouble it gets them into, and with this they begin to change their beliefs. They grow from the character they were at the beginning of the story.
I’ve done this for both my main characters in Cursecaster, and with each having their own incorrect core beliefs, there’s much more tension and conflict to be had. Muahahaha. Poor characters… we sure do love to torture them.
On a side note, I made hubby a yummy lemon meringue slice this weekend with lemons from the garden. Yum.
Would love to know if you develop your characters’ incorrect core beliefs.






Awesome tip! Thank you! Very helpful.
Most welcome.
What an excellent tip! I always find out during my first draft what my characters believe about the world, but I’ve never really thought about it as an “incorrect” belief. It’s putting a whole new spin on what I’ve uncovered about my characters – the truths for them versus the truths of the world they live in. Brilliant!
It’s such a great way to look at our characters.
That’s one delicious looking pie! I like this post- I think characters’ incorrect core beliefs reflect their private struggles and skeletons.
Thanks Cynthia
Great post! I like the incorrect core believes. What a great way to increase tension.
It sure does work.
I’m very distracted by the pie… Workshops and the like are great for brushing up on skills. It’s a great way to add depth to any story. Thanks for sharing your experience.
I love doing workshops… practice always helps.
what a helpful post! Definitely using this in my next round of revisions. and that pie is making my mouth water!
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Thanks:)
Thanks for the info on these belief systems. I’m going to revise a manuscript that needs more internal conflict.
That pie looks delicious.
Best of luck with your revisions.
That’s the way I see it . . . guess I picked it up from reading a zillion good books along the way:-) your pie looks divine!!!
Good way to pick it up:)
Awesome post! I love torturing my characters too. That is an excellent way of developing tension. I think everyone has at least one incorrect core belief. Most people go through life never having it challenged too.
That is so true… and a bit scary.
Great post and perfect timing! Been thinking what my story has been missing and this is something I need to beef up for my characters. Awww yum! And cute plate. Hehe did hubby like his pink plate ;p
Haha…Don’t think hubby even noticed the pink plate, just the slice he devoured…:)
I’ve been thinking of my characters’ weaknesses in terms of an Achilles heel–what about their personality makes them vulnerable? And how can I, as the storyteller, exploit that? Your post brought this concept into sharper focus for me.
Sounds like a great course by the way!
Now for some dessert …
The course is great… Susan is fantastic.
Great post! I am about to do an in-depth character profile for my MC to work on her arc and just fleshing her out more, so this is loads of help.
And what a yummy dessert! From the garden no less. Awesome.
Using anything from the garden always tastes better.
Awesome. I love adding conflict through character traits. This is where backstory can really help a writer out. Torture those characters!
Great post!
Backstory is the foundation for this…
A great reminder to examine my own writing for core beliefs. And I love your picture of the delicious lemon meringue.
Thanks… it was pretty delicious too.
Excellent explanation of core belief. I never thought about it, but, yes, this is the character’s main issue. For my most recent completed manuscript, my protagonist thinks she pales in comparison to her “good” and “smart” sisters. As a result, she avoids having a relationship with them and doesn’t try in school. But when her mother dies, I keep forcing the protagonist in situations with her sisters. She has to reevaluate her original assumptions about them and herself.
I love it when characters are forced into uncomfortable scenes where they are forced to face that their beliefs may be flawed… nice.
I think that is one of the best parts of a story – seeing how a character grows and deals with their internal conflicts, without it, the characters don’t have life. I think I’ve done this in the 2 books so far.
Great post!
Awesome.
I didn’t know it had a name either! I like it when I do something right by accident.
Love those too.
Perfect timing an this post! I’ve been reworking my novel to add more tension and this is what I’m working on. And by the way, that looks yummy!
Glad it helps.
Whenever I read posts like this, I think back over all the characters I’ve created… in this case, because a lot of my stories are about internal conflict I think I’ve nailed incorrect core belief, I just didn’t realise it had a name! And the meringue looks lovely – homegrown lemons… yum yum yum
Don’t you just love it when you do something right without thinking about it…